Thursday, May 12, 2011

Second Blog:
Sold is about a girl who lives in Nepal with her mother, step-father, siblings and her goat. her family is poor. they live in a village where it didn't rain for this season. the crops are dying and the family couldn't sell anything. She decided to work for a rich Indian lady in India, in order for her family to survive.
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3 comments:

  1. Ms. RoseMay 12, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    Zee,

    Good work! I would just make sure that you double check that you have written in complete sentences. I hope you are enjoying the book so far.

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  2. Ms. RoseMay 12, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    9/10

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  3. Ms. RoseMay 18, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    Nice work. My only suggestion is that you make sure you write in complete sentences with proper punctuation! :)

    8/10

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